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the internet shows green lights

If only life were to be so green
so serene
all human beings
would have loved to behave naturally
now it seems they have become mossy green
hiding behind trees green
see why I say so below

Women have become bolder than lords...
they now days
strike off with a knife...
those swords...
this once boasted all Lords...

but some women too
to hide their infidelity, own...
strike of men's, hubby's
singing striking softy bone...
and swing a knife...
with their amours help and say
'''hubby live now alone
in your only dumb way ...'''

They continue to with others lay
now say what you want to say
men and women have become alike
well
that's a sad day today...

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world is more bored those with the fat of things
those with the lean are too busy surviving
saw worked for all worlds in my time...
still chum with young bloods
they give me smokes
hold their territory streets
and the old cats
in the top cars
stocks...holdings
we chat...brilliance being
a language
and couples..
all on equal footing
thanks to sexting selfies
tinder tumbler instagram
so sell oneself
to others visa vie
visual

and jealousy abounds
words like knives swordplay
sounds

Zounds!

great poem Lovedly!
and its true..
we are turning into a homogenized
pack of zombies

thank U!

you are liking all my poetry
you have a lions heart I see
you are a poet extraordinary
all here know thee

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