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THE INDIAN WAY

INDIAN WAY
Ann 4th April 2012.

Trees diagonally lit, a ladder up
The Indian Way, leading to the stone,
an altar for the squirrel's meal
spread out with pine cone bracts,
the wind whispers vespers in the breeze

a leaf from autumns dress floats down,
delivers silent prayer, the roots play music
with their sinewy fingers clasping
velvet cushions, moss,
offering their ever changing shades

a song sounds bell-like through this
idyllic scene, its stillness breaks,
its melody a hymn to heaven,
that brought the spring early, not late,
good cheer, good cheer, good cheer,
it is the great tit yellow, black and white
that sings his herald to the sun

this year of twelve two thousand and,
since Easter was proclaimed, a stop,
to work, to take the hand of those in need,
a moment in this life of toil to breath
the air of peace and quiet,
deep in the forest's track, where soft
the tread is blessed with happiness
and blue the sky with only clouds of white.

Style / type: 
Free verse
Last few words: 
Today, walking past the place where I once wore a lilac Indian cotton dress and was photographed, hence the name, I saw it in yet another light, the sun out east creating such dark shadows; it turned into a poem, one for those who count this a particular time of year. Happy Easter all, Love Ann..i..nanya...akaya...nushka...of Norway.
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i love 'the wind whispers vespers in the breeze'

'a leaf from autumns dress floats down' - autumn's ? - love this line too - wonderful imagery

'this year of 12 two thousand and' - imho only, i think you should write 'twelve' ....

as usual what i expect from you annanya - a beautifully descriptive write that makes me feel as if i am there with you

happy easter to you too
love and hugs
judy xxx

'Each for the joy of the working, and each, in his separate star,
shall draw the Thing as he sees It, for the God of Things as They are.'
(Rudyard Kipling)

Of course you are right judyanne, it was a case of not thinking
about such banal things as numbers, I was in the poem and
writing it cursively forgot to change it to read properly, so right.

Yes I thought it fitted the wistfulness of Easter for others than myself too.
I mean for you (pl) for me it is just for Spring itself.

L annanya

"The image of yourself which you see in a mirror Is dead,
but the reflection of the moon on water, lives." Kenzan.

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beautiful gift
only lovely and beautiful folks
can relish the juices ...

loved

I am glad to be able to see and feel things as I do,
not cursed with diseases and troubles that would
colour all I do and write otherwise, I am sure.
It makes me also able to go through black times
with one eye on the things of joy.

Thank you.
Ann.

"The image of yourself which you see in a mirror Is dead,
but the reflection of the moon on water, lives." Kenzan.

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