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The imaginative mind

In my mental eyes
I walk into a long journey of better life
Looking for a better generation-in a greener pasture ground
i had thought- the only avenue to become easily successful
Lies in a beautiful memory, ruminating, and building imaginative world within
In a clear conscience,
I have begun to follow a few lives I had imagined
Though they're not all the best
But, I never saw the best of mind kind there.
The world of my mind is yet to set in.
In it, a good pleasure of life shall found.

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I liked the theme of your poem . Everyone tries to find the magic to be successful. Success comes to those who set goals and work towards achieving them. Example is how I try to write better here at Neopoet for over 7 years and keep working at it inspite of my failure ...
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raj (sublime_ocean)

Hahaha! true talk.

Thanks for reading Sir

Onyinyechi Cosmos

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