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I'm Misunderstood...

Submitted by Geezer on Sat, 2017-06-17 13:49

Tangerines and apples made school-days
Whatever happened to blue skies?
Muddy waters stir crazy and deep
I just want to know
The teeth that bite are red stained
No matter, if this doesn't rhyme
It's all a scam anyhow...

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Review Request (Direction): 
What did you think of my title?
How does this theme appeal to you?
Is the internal logic consistent?
Editing stage: 
Not actively editing

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wesley snow

Sat, 2017-06-17 14:42

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