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How crazy these delusions,
That arise in sheer confusion
For half-asleep it sets in my mind,
An eternity where thoughts are unconfined
Sense it makes when in this state,
But soon a reminder follows
A quick awakening brings reality, returns normality
To this half-deluded mind
As if to ever find,
Some sort of conclusion
What is normality, but an illusion?

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To go where the mind is free and wanders into realms of joy.
Written from some place in there held as a place of truth.
That the reality of being in this form we are each day
Is the only hope, that there is perfection but a thought away.
Welcome to Neopoet site and may your dreams be written with quiet truth of what you see and feel, we will worry about form later lol,
Yours Ian.T

There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

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