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Ill advised button pressing

People press my buttons
I have so many I psychically resemble a Dalek

Unfortunately the response is similar
“Exterminate. Exteminate you fuckers”

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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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I found a difficulty in the title . May be it needs an apostrophe somewhere to read ( I'll )
but still doesn't make much sense. I am sure I've missed something.

I also had to google Dalek, (Please excuse my ignorance)

but I can simply say it is a typical Elf piece (especially the last words.) smiles

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Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words
........Robert Frost☺

Did you Google image Dalek? See how many buttons they've got?
I felt it an apt metaphor for touchy irrascible people, not that I've ever met one [grins]

cheers,
Jess
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thanks for the clarification . too many buttons indeed.

❤❤❤❤❤❤

Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words
........Robert Frost☺

I didn't know you were a Doctor Who fan! Awesome!

It is such a secret place, the land of tears. ~Antoine de Saint-Exupéry

He switched my blackhole router for a wireless router and instead of an apocalypse I got a re-run of Dawson's Creek, the bastard.

cheers,
Jess
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