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Ill advised button pressing
People press my buttons
I have so many I psychically resemble a Dalek
Unfortunately the response is similar
“Exterminate. Exteminate you fuckers”
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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Rula
Mon, 2012-12-24 12:43
Hello Jess
I found a difficulty in the title . May be it needs an apostrophe somewhere to read ( I'll )
but still doesn't make much sense. I am sure I've missed something.
I also had to google Dalek, (Please excuse my ignorance)
but I can simply say it is a typical Elf piece (especially the last words.) smiles
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weirdelf
Mon, 2012-12-24 12:51
Ill as in sick or bad, no apostrophe missing
Did you Google image Dalek? See how many buttons they've got?
I felt it an apt metaphor for touchy irrascible people, not that I've ever met one [grins]
cheers,
Jess
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Rula
Mon, 2012-12-24 12:56
smiles
thanks for the clarification . too many buttons indeed.
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Blue_Halcyon
Tue, 2012-12-25 11:35
ELF!
I didn't know you were a Doctor Who fan! Awesome!
It is such a secret place, the land of tears. ~Antoine de Saint-Exupéry
weirdelf
Tue, 2012-12-25 17:25
I was a major fan till he screwed up my Mayan apocalypse.
He switched my blackhole router for a wireless router and instead of an apocalypse I got a re-run of Dawson's Creek, the bastard.
cheers,
Jess
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'Rhythm and Meter in Poetry'
https://www.neopoet.com/workshop/rhythm-and-meter-poetry