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If words could kill

Submitted by Apostolos "Paul... on Sat, 2021-05-29 02:03

Assassin
Ready to
Take casualties

Welcome to my mind
Fasten your seatbelts
Time to show you
A wordsmith
Trained in the art
Of expression

My pen targets the page
Spills venom, line by line
Words turn into bullets
That penetrate the mind

Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

Comments

Geezer

Sat, 2021-05-29 05:39

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great! Your title? I would go with something like "Killer Verbiage" or "If Words Could Kill." Anyway, good stuff! ~ Geez.
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