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If words could kill

Submitted by Apostolos "Paul... on Sat, 2021-05-29 02:03

Assassin
Ready to
Take casualties

Welcome to my mind
Fasten your seatbelts
Time to show you
A wordsmith
Trained in the art
Of expression

My pen targets the page
Spills venom, line by line
Words turn into bullets
That penetrate the mind

Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

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Mark

Sat, 2021-05-29 02:11

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Or detour but certainly an improvisation compared to your past poems. Short is always nice if the meaning is there (or logic) and it is). It's a beauty Paul. I'm not sure about the title. Use of the word verbal hmm :The Indigo Assassin" ???
Later,
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Geezer

Sat, 2021-05-29 05:39

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great! Your title? I would go with something like "Killer Verbiage" or "If Words Could Kill." Anyway, good stuff! ~ Geez.
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Mark

Sat, 2021-05-29 18:11

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^5

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