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if only 'twere my hands....

I would've be able to answer you
touch me not
for the love of life,
my hands are scorching bloody white hot

you seem to touch many a hands
never mind

I hate one night stands
Not that I profess others to ignore

sex is loving
for only true lovers for sure…
if you are one
hold her hand
but only if till you can stand

if there is no vulgarity
serenity is all we look into it...
its naturality
and sexiness shall be privy

please note
wonderful edit by Ian

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Free verse
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The theme is fine just a little more me think's..
Your title word twere needs an apostrophe and the, blooody hot white, would be better if it was "bloody white hot" just the two o's in bloody and to switch the last two words it would go with line two..
Take care out there and have a great weekend,
Yours Ian.T
PS:- I shall stick to using my own Hands, not the one with the Black spot, or was that Blind Pugh, La La..

There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

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