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If I could wrap my head around these things, I'd be a fly in a spider web

yup.
that's the whole poem.

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Nice to see you posting here again. It makes my heart good to see the older friends.
I thought there is a good thought and a subtext here, but also thought it would have been better if you gave a shorter title and extended your thought a little bit more to give us, the readers a space to enjoy. Anyway I know you when you revolutionize even over yourself.
best regards to you.

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Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words
........Robert Frost☺

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I've lost count.
They are all good causes though.

cheers,
Jess
A new workshop on the most important element of poetry-
'Rhythm and Meter in Poetry'
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Hi Rula, sometimes I turn inside out, and my poems are askance.

Hi Jess. A woman's work is never done. lol.

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Lysistrata was wrong. Lots of sex stops war.

cheers,
Jess
A new workshop on the most important element of poetry-
'Rhythm and Meter in Poetry'
https://www.neopoet.com/workshop/rhythm-and-meter-poetry

baby fighters along the way,

Babies live to continue the evolutionary line.

cheers,
Jess
A new workshop on the most important element of poetry-
'Rhythm and Meter in Poetry'
https://www.neopoet.com/workshop/rhythm-and-meter-poetry

Bravo my Dear!!!!!!!

bravo..

(mr Wolf)

the essence of you right there in that one sentence

love xox

("Always and Forever") - (Never lose a holy curiosity.-Albert Einstein)

would be nice if after a while you let us know the essence of this write by decoding the abstract...till then you have me guessing...

raj (sublime_ocean)

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