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Identity Theft

Can you find me?
Surrounded by fake identity
Who am I?
Who was I?
How to act?
How to love?
How to try to be normal?
Please help me!
One big question mark clothes me and darkness
What am I?
Where am I?
Who could I be?
Try to stay calm
But how
Lost all alone
What is my identity?

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This is how I feel in high school. Trying to figure out who to be and what to act like.Who to hang with and who to avoid. Its really cool though how many of my friends have read this poem and got the message i was trying to convey.
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