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Ian and Loved..Duo poets

Ian and Loved.. By.......Duo poets

Better to walk the beach alone,
you too
Better to walk the beach alone,

Friends will gather,
as they call
your name
one by one.

Ian
and
Loved

Loved
and
Ian

Life can be so
very lonely
even when...
in a crowded room

Better to walk the beach alone,
never moan
one day the world
will you, alone own...

The small bard was
also ours!!!!!!

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Free verse
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Just a play on some of my old words,
bringing them up to todays use,
as a new poem or answer to your writes.
Alone in a room full
Walking alone on the beach etc:
No matter where you are or what you do
there is only You.
This is where personal responsibility comes in.
You are responsible for all you ever do,
and the effect it has on others.
Take care young Bard, and clean your footprints up LOL,
They should only be on the lawn not the virgin sand.
Yours Ian.T

.
There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

I know over time you both have created a great bond of friendship, its nice to read how you feel about him, this could do with a tidy up but then I always say that don't I lol ;)

love JC xxx

("Always and Forever") - (Never lose a holy curiosity.-Albert Einstein)

do tidy up those
you promised to do
there are only two

loved

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