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I Thought I'd Think Your Thought
Excuse me
for interrupting
I'm just passing through
through the membrane
of your brain
just a thought, thinking of
passing through
like a memory
galloping into view
take me now
rein me in
and I'm yours or
leave me alone
as if I never was
a war child without a home
Nourish me with distance.
Blind me with your light.
Dance me from your insight
or take from me a brilliant bite.
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Candlewitch
Tue, 2012-07-17 12:06
Dear Anna,
Your imagination and mingled muse are a treasure to be valued and throughly enjoyed. Can't quote you favorite lines this time. But I can tell you that I marvel at how your mind works and spins out fine art.
always, Cat
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Kailashana2
Tue, 2012-07-17 12:30
Is that a nice way of saying
Is that a nice way of saying that I'm crazy as a soup sandwich? ;-)
Thanks for the read, Cat. Hope all is well and blessed.
p.s.
Dingo dog says arf arf, Cat.
author commentRula
Tue, 2012-07-17 13:20
Such a romance
Which I think the first I read from you. Much like it Anna.:-) keep the good mood
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Kailashana2
Tue, 2012-07-17 18:02
Haha. Romance? Not quite.
Haha. Romance? Not quite. Unless one talks to oneself. If it really is entertainment we seek, well, there's at least 7 billion *thinkers* *out there*. ;-)
I'm talking specifically of thoughts, Rula. How they enter our minds, what they are, and who the thinker is, really.
Did you know that a thought is no more than a chemical reaction in the brain? Something we have imprinted and believed to be real and true? Then accept it as *our own*?
~Anna
author commentRoscoe Lane
Tue, 2012-07-17 19:00
I thought,
I thought i told you to hold that thought, and there you go, Sorry just funnin, we should treat each thought as our last, and run with them to see where they may lead. They shan't turn our heads no sir no indeed. Beginning of a song mmm? sorry just a thought. LOL. Love Roscoe..
Roscoe Llane,
Religion will rip your faith off, and return
for the mask of disbelief that's left.
Ian.T
Thu, 2012-07-19 03:33
Anna
Inside or outside you travel with ease, are we safe from your journey's walk.
Thought I felt something stir the other day, but sadly a memory not Anna lol Grand write there young lady, Yours Ian.T
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So find more reasons to believe in others..
weirdelf
Fri, 2012-07-20 10:25
avid,
oh yes,
avid.
cheers,
Jess
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judyanne
Fri, 2012-07-20 13:19
lol
you obviously take 'brilliant bites' from many of your thoughts anna
i love how your mind works sometimes
love judy
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