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I Said I'd Come..The Response

I Said I Would

I said I would come along
Sorry twas a bit late
The snow was the main cause
Was so heavy a snow fall
The paths screwed
I wish I’d shown you the view

But don’t worry,
I’d said I’d come along
Have I kept you waiting for long?

The weather is cold,
Breezy still,
In the air there is a mighty chill
I’d told you to wait for me
And
Together we were to warm!
See I’ve braved the weather
The storm
Next time I shant keep you
Waiting this nasty way
As you had to today

Happy, I kept my word
Twas our first date
But better late
Than never
as they say
Come along smile once again
Even though I’m a wee bit
OK, OK,
a bit too late

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Free verse
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Comments

AT times when i go out
in the snow over here
i feel much warmer
than
when i am in side here

so i will amend it to we
as u say
obviously

please do read
someone wrote a poem on LOVED
which one?

loved

author comment

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cheers,
Jess
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