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I meant LOL

Submitted by loved on Sat, 2012-05-12 23:53

There was a silenced lull,
on the Neopoets site,
For a while,
my heart skipped many a beat
and how about yours
twas the teary eyes
of passers bys
who consoled me alright
that soon the site will again
be in sight
twas.

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Free verse
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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Editing - rough draft

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Rula

Sun, 2012-05-13 09:58

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I felt the same dear loved...Thanks for sharing.

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loved

Sun, 2012-05-13 11:17

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Birds of a feather
think together
and
am glad
now returns the lovely weather

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scribbler

Sun, 2012-05-13 10:05

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Indeep it brought back memories of the "great crash".......glad it was quickly resolved

Candlewitch

Sun, 2012-05-13 12:53

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Not a day goes by (unless I'm very ill) that I don't check in with Neopoet and my fellow members. I felt slightly lost these past few days without it.

:)
Cat

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loved

Sun, 2012-05-13 15:33

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many were rocking with me
in a similar boat
distantly though

nice to know
we all are not all alone
since its all over..
no sighs ...no moans...
let bygones be bygones
and
strike our heads again with a stone..
haaa haaa to compose
like we always do
but silently alone..
HAPPY POETRISING AGAIN ...Cat

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Ian.T

Sat, 2012-05-19 04:01

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Just Know that we missed you when the site was down as we did the Companion ship of all the people there.
The ship Companion is once again in full sail on a placid Ocean, Yours Ian.T
.

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There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

loved

Sat, 2012-05-19 04:54

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That I was not on board
the sinking ship

IMMORTAL TITANIC

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loved

Sat, 2012-05-19 09:13

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says was born in 1960
is he your son ???
wish to know

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Ian.T

Sat, 2012-05-19 09:53

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Not that I know of loved I have two Son's at the moment lol can't afford any more, You take care out there, Yours Yenti La La

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There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

loved

Sat, 2012-05-19 14:10

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You will be amazed
when I say how it fits
into my study of the
Human Mind...
Based on
Environment...
Circumstance
and
Heredity import..

loved

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