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I LIVE TO SEE

JUST LET ME
B
let me not eclipse
fathomless seas
will all
ye
I still live
pardon me

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

Comments

will only pardon if I know your shortcomings! Would you please let it out?

"Poetic license
gives
the poets
the free will to
embroider a good tale
and deviate from the established rules of language"~Jackweb

what is wrong? are you all right?

*hugs, Cat

When someone reads your work
And responds, please be courteous
And reply in kind, thanks.

as Gee was asleep
just posted a few words
as I gassed
the market cost had RISEN* * TYPO Gee is diamond like vigilant
I saw last evening
bless all car owners
a car I have
N O N E
Thank heaven

author comment

I was just resting my eyes. The market cost is not ridden, [it has risen].
~ Geez.
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It seems that the days and hours that people
are available for chatroom are staggered and
not a good match for most everyone. How about
if everyone just shows up at the door, whenever
they have a few free minutes?

what has ridden and risen
Kindly elucidate
I've been living in oblivion lately
Poet Gee you sound so softly
lol

author comment

in your comment to Cat, that the market cost of gas had [ridden]. I reminded you, that the proper word was [risen]. Softly is my trademark. ~ Geez.
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It seems that the days and hours that people
are available for chatroom are staggered and
not a good match for most everyone. How about
if everyone just shows up at the door, whenever
they have a few free minutes?

at night I'm more blind
no sun does shine

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