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I feel ...do you too

I feel dry
nothing left to try
time to
say
goodbye
don't ever be shy
and
ask me not why
let time fly by
the world will also
time to part comes too
for anyone including me and you
still I say and ask of you
How do you do
who!

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Free verse
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Comments

A normal feeling we might get some day(s).
I don't think you need the last "who"
Or do you? :)

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Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words
........Robert Frost☺

I suppose so
we all are human
and
aged poets of neo

author comment

interesting use of rhyme but still got your point across

Shadowdancer for your maiden comments
would love more
let peace be the world

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