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So many years
have been -blossomed by time
I've always taken you for granted
you know it

Now comes the hour
hence forth
I must entrap you in my heart
for the remaining time
then you will continue to be
a part of me
here and there
everywhere I go
you will also
make me glow
this poem
I composed for you
hope you will know

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Free verse
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sentiment. I hope a part of me can go with you also. Just the good part, though, okay?

. like my lost dreams...the flood

So beautiful so kind of you
thanks as always

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Don't we all take time for granted? Alas the supply is not endless."To make me glow"....seems forced for some reason; try deleting "to" and see if it works better

I MUST ABIDE Thanks Stan

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Is the best one you have posted in awhile!
I’ve no suggestions here
Thank you for this!

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I become the best footballer
I kick the ball far
likewise 'tis for poetry
this poem is being carried around the world
by inty meaning INTERNET
Many Thanks

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