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'''I could have danced all night''''
'''I could have danced all night''''
You help recall
Some one
who still lives in my heart
entered through a keyhole in my eye
as she did smile
and
her soft voice is of memory
just a wee part
I always smile
she left us all
seemingly for a while
but within my heart
left an indelible smile...
'''I could have danced all night''''
Still I hear
from the one
who was to most very dear
she is far
but yet so near
thanks to you
my poet of Death
as reverberations you endear....
It’s like a reminisce I fear
come one day
with her we all will again be near
but in the far distant horizon
none will be able to steer
but her soft voice
we shall continue to hear
Audrey Hepburn to many was
to many a living a
DEER!
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Sparrow
Mon, 2015-07-13 18:51
Loved
I like this write and the ref to Audrey Hepburn was good she was a beautiful woman, and gave the world lots of pleasure in her acting here is a few words from Wiki that you may like:-
Audrey Kathleen Ruston; 4 May 1929 – 20 January 1993) was a British actress and humanitarian.
Recognised as a film and fashion icon, Hepburn was active during Hollywood's Golden Age.
She was ranked by the American Film Institute as the third greatest female screen legend in the history of American cinema and has been placed in the International Best Dressed List Hall of Fame.
She is also regarded by some to be the most naturally beautiful woman of all time.
Well being British it was obvious wasn't it ??
Take care young Bard, another Brit you like, maybe you will love Sparrows one day lol,
Yours Ian
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lovedly
Mon, 2015-07-13 19:50
thank you for your enlightenment Ian
when my time comes
also place me in
THE HALL OF FLAMES
Hahaahahaaa
where else would I be found
friend Ian your bard!
author commentSparrow
Tue, 2015-07-14 03:44
Loved
as myself you are doomed to be one of the forgotten mass that walks the Earth.
That we are here for our own enlightenment is good enough for me.
The old saying about passing this way but once and doing good is still a prime directive of enhancing your Spirit.
It is simple young Bard Excalibur is just a piece of mystic metal but is remembered by more than any great person in history so we have little chance..
Take care out there where ever you are,
Yours, Ian..
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lovedly
Tue, 2015-07-14 11:45
WHY doomed to be one of the forgotten mass
we both are born to bloom
ask Jess my master
your care taker
I A N
author commentGeremia
Tue, 2015-07-21 09:18
Beautifully done, Heart felt
Beautifully done, Heart felt !!!!!
joe
lovedly
Tue, 2015-07-21 13:46
Thank you Joe
This was a different Audrey Hepburn
now I know
author commentSparrow
Tue, 2015-07-21 19:07
Loved
That the wind still touches my face
That the sun shines warm to my skin
There for a moment in your time
I am at peace with all creatures.
Here they walk with me always.
Where are you young Loved
Are you walking the path with us
If so then just think my name
And I will find you..
Yenti..Ian.T , Sparrow and Grandad
Oh! and the Spirit name of "Alexander"
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lovedly
Tue, 2015-07-21 19:14
as always ur in mind
still u can't find
author commentSparrow
Tue, 2015-07-21 19:36
Loved
That you are OK is fine,
there is no need to find thee,
Yenti ..
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lovedly
Wed, 2015-07-22 00:21
thanx
2
ye
author commentSparrow
Thu, 2015-07-23 04:36
Loved
The gender escapes me
There in the forest of life lives an old Spirit
Holding onto something dreamed of
Where they walk with others on an equal footing
No remarks just a pure think
There in the peace of the universe
We all shall walk again
Without legs
Sometimes without form
Yet our pattern will be eternal
It will ring throughout the world
We can claim as ours
A position of grace for always,
Ian..
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Esker
Thu, 2015-07-23 04:15
a subdued and great write Loved!
Like your words very much..and your creative comments..
they are lively and expressive greatly!!
..
Hall of Flames!! I like that line!
I myself will be cremated
and set on a train to be scattered
down the line...I like trains..
thank U for this great ode to Audrey!!
lovedly
Thu, 2015-07-23 13:41
and Esker
thank u for this flamey comment
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