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I Can... [Random poem challenge # 6]

I can see that this will be easy
I can tell you that right now
I can hear you sigh so breezily... but
I CAN WRITE RHYMES ABOUT COWS!
I can tell you don't believe me
I can tell that you don't think it's true
I can feel a cow-write, just coming on
I can start right here, in front of you
I can do it in just a minute, you see... and
I can put your name in it too!

Style / type: 
Structured: Western
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Review Request (Direction): 
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
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Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

Comments

I suppose you could do all of that even while riding a cow. This one has your usual metrical flair, cute content and enjoyable rhyming, which is always a delight to read.

Thomas

....so like my lost dreams...the flood

I think I will do all of the challenges, it keeps the juices flowing. Something to do besides watch shitty TV. ~ Geez.
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