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How Foolish Of Me

I have wasted all my beautiful life
in being garlanded as beautiful
poetry wise
the whole world is reading me
daily
topper mainly
sad none knows
who is the poet veiled
behind monument of Time

Why am I wasting my breath
illustrious time
My foolishness is
my greatest crime

Wow now I hear mid nite bells chime
Lovedly
is it not yet time
wise up quickly will ye
before the bell tolls
for only
Thee

Dearly me

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Comments

Figured you were feeling neglected so thought I'd drop by lol.Now I liked this poem even thought it hasn't got a single rhyme lmao. I think in line 6 you might clarify who "topper" is. Crap! reread and realize there ARE rhymes here but so unobtrusive as to go unnoticed. Good job........stan

Well even though this still screams "pick me pick me". It's not a bad poem. Subtle rhyme. But as usual its a cry for attention. I'd so love to read a poem that wasn't all about you. Though in saying that ? Its a pretty good poem. Maybe I picked the wrong poem to read ? Lol

Cheers

Jayne.

("Always and Forever") - (Never lose a holy curiosity.-Albert Einstein)

how is the medication
hope you are better
sincerely
Friendly
Serendipity ..
Have no pity
just lonely

author comment

Keep plugging along lovedly. You have many friends, just busy lately. Don't feel neglected, we are always close by and ready to comfort you. Just get in line. ~ Gee.
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From miles I see
those who know
Lovedly is getting bored
they come like you do
to comfort me
a seeker of love more
less wankering attraction

a poet has to have a heart
full of busting emotion
then only the world will read one
like lovedly
and I love you all mostly
as I know you too love me

read me
pull me up gradually
You all Neos are beautifuller than me
you knew as Loved since ages

now as add on ''ly''
technically
ask why Stan only

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