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A HOPEFUL SONG JUST WAIT

It is a warm Wednesday
just wait
It is sunny today bright so far
just wait
I am going to wear not much
just wait at sea
who is with me

you he or she
don't be funny
just wait
love my humour
just wait

yeah now tell me
just wait
is every one wet
ah now tell
don't just wait

spill it over
just yet

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Free verse
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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words: 
Inspired by a sill y song i heard last night
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Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

Comments

I'll sit in the sand with you
let the water fill my shoes
Get all wet, cool off I bet
I've got nothing better to do.

Let's bring a six pack of beer
just for a bit of cheer
Call up Snoop Dog, drink some more grog
He'll like our group though we're weird
~ Geez.
.

It seems that the days and hours that people
are available for chatroom are staggered and
not a good match for most everyone. How about
if everyone just shows up at the door, whenever
they have a few free minutes?

FOR SHOES READ
S H O E
Maybe better do c
morer songly

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