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It is not
always
any port
in a storm
and yet
it could be.

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and a warm welcome to the Neo. I hope you will enjoy your time here.

A nice little piece. I usually like brevity , but I thought this needs to be a bit extended to tell us more about Home, a place where we all relate to .
Welcome again.
Looking forward to reading more.

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Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words
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Its so nice to have you back again, and you know I always loved your 'little' poems :) Its so good to read you again, don't be away so long next time huh ?

I loved this one, could be ;)

Love JC xxx

("Always and Forever") - (Never lose a holy curiosity.-Albert Einstein)

good poetry. i would however discard the first it... for the poem to read 'home is...'
welcome.

I agree with Nokros about doing away with It in the first line. I always admire the likes of you who can convey a lot in so little words..

regards,

raj (sublime_ocean)

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