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holding her eye .....2009

Submitted by loved on Sat, 2013-01-05 04:54

the eyes
the smile
Ah! the gaze
the lips twitching do amaze

the dimple cheeks one can’t ignore,
the wink and slant look all do adore
the cleavage is where, hangs an eye
no one can say why…

oh! a lass always looks into
the other’s eye
and
as she holds it for a second more
the voyeur knows
he is in for much more ..

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Free verse
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Editing - rough draft

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crypticbard

Fri, 2013-01-18 05:14

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is in fact her lover!
Else she will be hard-put to extricate herself
form a potentially sticky situation. :-)

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loved

Fri, 2013-01-18 05:18

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gives one an impression
that perhaps the voyeur in you
steps in
haahahhaa
howz uuu??

loved

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crypticbard

Fri, 2013-01-18 05:47

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under medication.
The doctors will have to run tests again
before they set me free to graze on the mountainside.
All else is good otherwise. Thanks for asking after me :-)

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'write on! let these words free.'

loved

Fri, 2013-01-18 05:50

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in Ottawa Canada
there is a museum
which shows a large
SHEEP

below that it says

they she .. goes in for size
I wonder ...

well glad the medication will ensure
that you graze and gaze as before
as fresh hopefully
knowing you so..

INSTANT RECOVERY

loved

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crypticbard

Fri, 2013-01-18 08:27

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in a way we all are sheep
and that may be enough material
for a poem of its own. lol.

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loved

Fri, 2013-01-18 08:50

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bbahh

loved

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