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his train episode

This is the most natural series...
of a sleeping serpent...
with the warmth of his apples...
waiting for the seed to be ripened...
then implanted
as did Adam into Eve...
such is your train journey story.
twill is lovely...
as comes out a smaller plant-
---- combined----
like two in blue...
she and you...
the outcome of train journey
naturally would do...
for you two!

Style / type: 
Free verse
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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Comments

I enjoyed the inuendos burried in your poem. The work flows nicely.

kindness
others too whenever

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