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His First Love Remembered

Poetic showers,
Song, blanket
Pulling, breathless breathing,
This is a cute and maiden
Pornographic measure of ecstasy
They have permitted
As it scores in dignified decency
The gradual lust
Slowly rises the masculinity,
As orgasms
He her first
The feminity
Laps all juices of joy
A flower full of petals strewn
For the bee or boy
To sexily enjoy

Such wondrous lovemaking
Can only pour
From the
Mind of a lover of yore
That one,
you must have been for sure.

Take note the springs
Of love have sprung
No snows can dampen
All the fun
As the expanse of a cloudy night
Gives her the freedom
As within the hearth of fire
He does burn the boredom.

The ideas for this poem
emanates from the mind of
some Sinile Grandpa.

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 


a good one...but left me wondering about the source of inspiration which as you have said. is

The ideas for this poem
emanates from the mind of
some Sinile Grandpa.

raj (sublime_ocean)


Neopoet Directors

Loved is now lovedly
no one reads old poetry
why only * it?

No way can I comment on every 4 year old poem however I have found some members who have left and might return.

You don't need to waste your time replying to my .'s

Neopoet Directors

certianly a lustful and carnal adventure
with notations of poetic nature
heavy poeting

your works are certianly alive
and belief in subject matter
is here

Great thing about the originality
of believing in your poetry
and finding that voice
and style that gets it out there
is like a confident
move thats all your own
borrowed a bit in the
beginning as any influence
but eventually
tamed to turn
wonders for the show..

Thank You!

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