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I wish heroes exist.
With that problems are less
I am saved every day.
It would be a great deal of security,
to see them flying on schedule.
They would kill all the villains,
and dedicate the battle to me.
They will never die because
They have super powers,
They are immortal...
They live to protect me.
But I only watch my heroes on TV.

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A good theme, yes it is a pity that they don't exist except for the TV world that maintains a false world to the watchers.
It is sad that we have a wonderful tool in TV and childrens games, that is dedicated to Death and people that they call celebs.
It is our fault we even get porn that is an excuse as an advert to make more money.
It is a pity that mostly Women are used in this way.
That's our way of life now, our heroes have to be false.
Keep writing young lady I look forward to your next piece,
Yours Ian.T

There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

Thank you so much. I was never a fan of super heroes until I thought of them this way. Heroes are so trending in the movies and cannot help but see how unreal they are. its sad though.

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We are all heroes for surviving our humanity I loved this poem!


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