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Hemisphere is still expanding
Three billion years
we have survived
and
another few more
we have not yet met
how at the end we shall
can you assure?
they know no less
no more
we all expand to maximum
and
then relax
that's for sure
so will the world
may also collapse
neither you nor I will know
so enjoy the night
once more
with the ones you loved to,
as before
no less
any more
we all expand for sure
to that extent only
no less no more
will we meet then
can you assure
four billions is a long time
we may not be any more
but we will today
enjoy as before
once more time
tonight
of that be sure
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Free verse
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Sun, 2016-02-21 21:25
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