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HELLO ...Good Morning to the WHOLE World OF NEOPOETS

This is a new Morn

The sun is up as usual,

We bow to thee

Oh Sun Lord

Without thy blessings

There can be none at all.

Thy kingdom comes,

As a man made

Integration of time,

As tis a continuous stream

We slice it into pieces,

As we need a remembrance,

Which you don’t need

Its eons passed

Millions upon millions

Aeons of aeons,
gone by

How eras do fly.

But upon stronger shoulders

Of an ever newer generation,

We still lay the burden of tomorrow,

As comes another one

Today is that day

With a newer sun.

Let the minds
of this devastating world,

Full of egoistic generations

With rampant corruption,

Unearth under every stone

A plant,

We all want to supplant

That shall fulfill our greed

Of wealth, money, honey

Ah! What blasphemy!

Upon the shoulders of ailing society,

We leave a burden

To furrow a new era

That emerges so sudden

As the sunrise
ere did today,

As the sun had hardly

Or never set ever,

As they all do say.

We pray to the luminescence

Of the rising sun,

Let’s start life anew,

It’s the fist day

(of 2011)

That we all by now knew.

Happy tidings my worldly friends,

Another sojourn does now commence

Let it have a happier end

That’s the prayer from me

Friend of all humanity

Lovely Honey

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