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Hello Dreamers

Submitted by lovedly on Fri, 2023-01-27 12:30

I'm a pragmatic being

Dreams are subconscious fantasies
brain has synaptic maps
of all occurrences
and
they surface oddly....

Attach no importance to dreams...
why must we uselessly scream

It's just a simple thoughtless
boundless fancy
and a loss of any recollection...
you call it
Nostalgic

Just skip over the dream
by next morning
unless you day dream

Style / type:

Free verse

Review Request (Intensity):

I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Last few words:

We all dream many just forget it...

Editing stage:

Editing - rough draft

Content level:

Not Explicit Content

Comments

Lavender

Fri, 2023-01-27 18:55

Hello Dreams

Hello, Lovedly,
I love dreaming. Mine are vivid and lively, and a whole lotta fun! It sounds like the reference to screaming in this poem may speak of the dreams that aren't so fun - and that is a bummer. I agree to not take dreams too seriously. Sweet dreams!
Lav

lovedly

Sat, 2023-01-28 00:21

Thanks Lav

I dream day and night
during day ones I smile
at night
depends who comes

but for me dreams are
FUN

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Geezer

Sat, 2023-01-28 08:31

I believe...

that dreams are the subconscious-mind talking to your conscious mind. The subconscious doesn't have language of its own, so it uses symbolism to get your attention. Your conscious mind fills in the blanks of any conversation, trying make dreams have sense. Subconscious-mind is with us all the time, it never sleeps, and it sees things that conscious mind doesn't notice, making connections and figuring things out. Lovedly, I think you are finally making the connection to reality. Too bad, we will miss your zany dreams. LoL. ~ Geez.
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lovedly

Sat, 2023-01-28 10:53

Geez

I have no words for thee ....I have read so many of your analyses ...I wonder how you are so highly gifted ...
Yes my scientific imagery speaks for me ...
we are just moving atoms
----electrons ----neutrons and protons ..in a circle
going about the sun... as we draw solar energy ....
till we have spare electrons
Then all is forgotten ....sub and -conscousness merge ...
we become like a burning butterfly
towards etrnity
as ash/dust fly

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lovedly

Sat, 2023-01-28 13:36

Thanks MARK

I record at the instant then add up here and there

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