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Submitted by loved on Tue, 2012-09-18 01:40

Hello! Calling London!

London is a really beautiful city,
that I now can see
so many friends out there
are now calling out at me
also
so many of you
I’d like to meet
if you all choose
a common street

Johnny, yes our Johnny says
he wouldn't like to see me
but he still likes my poetry.

so many like Tanya,
the secret girl
still calls out to me
lhlhlh come over to UK
meaning London
did she?

What a beautiful Sunday
in London,
I may say
twill that day be!

call me over on another Sunday
I’d love to come if you say
a city like London
I’d like to see
ere
I go and meet god finally

for I would love to pay
my tributes and thanks giving
to my dear Lord
oh! Yes, to thee!

I am too insignificant a person,
but it will be my honour
and good luck
to see the Queen
its just incidental that today,
I have had an occasion,
to reflect twice on
Her Majesty

I have no snaps

that Ican post here .

my regrets
Please do bear with me…

Style / type: 
Free verse
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Ian.T

Tue, 2012-09-18 03:54

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I hold the secrets of many years, way before your land had our heavey feet tread its paths.
My history is laid out there row on row for you to see remember me.
But there are places that we never show, where peoples lives are tossed just so, that we may grow in riches more.
I will welcome you with open ways and hope that you would spend many days just being here with me.
Though, can you not realise I am just another city..
Yours, London..

.
There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

loved

Tue, 2012-09-18 05:46

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unbeatable in any sphere
london amstY.. ny ...canada buenoaires
any city
but
LONDON TWILL BE.
Where one day
I will meet thee
hopefully
well before we both meet
sadie...

loved

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Nilmini

Tue, 2012-10-02 11:19

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I lived an year of my life in London. I experienced both good and bad and it took me sometime to adjust to the life there and settle down. Although I've returned back to my own country and now living here happily, there are times I miss London so much. I've been to few other countries in the Europe, but in my heart UK (London) is definitely my second home.

I guess I should try writing about my second home someday.

loved

Tue, 2012-10-02 14:23

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I don't know
how young you are Lady

but I smell the flavour of youth
from across the laps top
on roof tops
where you see
from a far off distance,
a ship in which perhaps
is your Captain of love
you are looking for
in search
in the lurch
where you think is paradise
it’s my surmise
in London he still does reside
abandoned by you
yet he returns in your daily dreams
so to say smiling face
Nilmini,
why are you being so funny
come back my dear,
I'd make love to you,
let what others say
until the end of life,
I shan’t say adieu
Hope my searching one
my hearts affection
you so truly knew.

loved

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Geremia

Wed, 2012-10-03 19:25

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GOOD ONE. Yes

loved

Thu, 2012-10-04 00:27

loved's picture

kindness yes
still being read across the internet

loved

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