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Heavenly Home?

Striking Mother lode
Many light years beyond abode
To enforce our code

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Structured: Eastern
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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Recently an announcement was made by a leading leader of a leading nation that Space would be the next arena of exporting values. Several select sovereign states on Earth have already been cleansed according to the dictates of special interests and another irritant power is in the cross-hairs for a political and cultural makeover courtesy of the nefarious neocolonial nexus, Similarly, Space is about to be imprinted, fingerprinted, copyrighted, incorporated, indoctrinated and parceled out by spaced-out Earthlings.
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as long as they don't make us read Vogon poetry!
Dig your work as perhaps few here do.

Try IRiz's's new form 'Duotriquat'. Three lines, 2 syllables, 3 syllables, 4 syllables. It opens new vistas in compression of meaning,

cheers,
Jess
A new incentive for critique, description at
https://www.neopoet.com/community/news/proposal-encouraging-critiquescom...
discussion at
https://www.neopoet.com/forum/23390

Thanks. Just because you recommended it, I will compose a Duotriquat (original format and the name is more inventive than Rhyku).

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Wordy Account (Duotriquat)
Two words
or Three words
Leading forwards

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