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He Crept

He crept up on me
played my strings
lowered walls
built trust
teased me
praised me
I love him

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I like the shorter lines I often use them myself, I really liked the poem I hope you showed him ;)

sincerely JC

("Always and Forever") - (Never lose a holy curiosity.-Albert Einstein)

Ah thanks so much well I married him lol glad u enjoyed
kind regards

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I've been engaged for over 10 years one of these days I will marry his arse just hasnt seemed that important to me, im happy hes happy, he on the other hand is another matter he cant wait to get married


("Always and Forever") - (Never lose a holy curiosity.-Albert Einstein)

i only got married this y ear in July and the hardest part is living with him because we didn't beforehand u have all that work done lol x

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sueb, almost every poem of yours I have read makes you sound pathetic.

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