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Would I be happier
if I sold all my wealth
and
placed all my dollars on a trailer
as I pulled it along the
Park Avenue New York
Or
would I be a happier guy
to walk in an open collar shirt
flashing my soft skin
in the summer’s beginning heat
across WHITE HOUSE.
Washington DC
None would know me
That’s why the NOBEL was introduced
by the GRANITE MAN
who faked his death
and
wanted to hear
what he would be thought of
and
hoped to be really missed
Someone shouted
O boy
'Listen the granite guy just died...'
He felt ashamed
So he placed all his wealth
in a Trust
and
each year they give off
millions of dollars
his name lives
But does he know it...
My new thought wave
''It is the biggest folly
to make earning money
a Hobby...'''
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Comments
IRiz
Mon, 2018-05-07 10:35
Nice poem!
Nice poem!
It was interesting to read, it has your usual great flow. But also a unique story.
I like it very much.
IRiz
lovedly
Mon, 2018-05-07 11:28
ha lol
you are great Iriz
did you Replace
the I with ur own name
while reading it?
TRY TO
IRiz
Mon, 2018-05-07 12:26
Don't play with my sacred
Don't play with my sacred feelings of property owner!
Hahaha
IRiz
lovedly
Mon, 2018-05-07 13:37
yeah
ur one of such a class poet
I love to read and compose poetry
Thanks Iriz