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hat trick eh

My Mom's Smiles
she left to me
all in smiles
poetry wise...

Next came autumnal one
no intended pun
I too ran
also partly won

Now they say
for Red Wagon* run
I wonder whether to shun
beg your pardon

I am now an old shot gun
to be kept in a mortuary,
sorry, may be I'd meant
an Archery
what should say yee
should I attempt a
now too

*I have been ....on a RED wagon once

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Free verse
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Go for the hat trick, is that a magical trick. Or three goals. Nice poem Regards Roscoe...

Roscoe Llane,

Religion will rip your faith off, and return
for the mask of disbelief that's left.

Roscoe I have done so already
do care to read it!

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