The poem sounds good to me.
Although I am not sure if asking your reader directly whether you are a poet is a good topic.
There are so many topics for a poem!
Tell me what was your day like, or tell me about history of light and thousand of whales dead, or tell me about how you were lost once on a trail...
Looking forward to hear from you.

of excellent poetry in your poems, but a lot sometimes too raw. The ink hasn't dried yet. I think when the critiques come about your poem is when they are much like sketches.
Like a painter, some time one has to do a few sketches of a model in a pose to get it right on the canvas. Then the painting has gets colored and each process has time to evolve.
What happens in the early stage of a poem is we try to say too much. That's what I feel is the case here. Just attempting to define poetry

poetry is simple emotion
as it effervesces from anyone
from a poet to a reader
though not all.

here there is too much to consider- is poetry simple emotion, not a complex emotion? Effervesces is a great word, but to goes from poet to reader, but not all readers? It becomes a load on the reader to catch the flow. In the end, is it not the reader determining you are a poet , we are after all reading your poem. Obviously you believe you are a poet, don't worry what we think.
Just Write as they say. But also, let the stew cook a while and come fresh to it in the morning sometimes..

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