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happee three jay!
happee three jay!
I went and came
Joe... Jess and Jayne
all have one thing common
all are humane
and
all have a relativity too
the common letter J
don't feel jay
Ian
we all love you too
many dawns we have also seen
young bard still you call me
i love it
so do continue
and
may be some day
you will know
ere you go
who was Loved too
may god bless you
KIDS OF GOD!
All so nice to me
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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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lovedly
Thu, 2015-09-24 23:42
sadly unread stilll they alll r ill
do have a llok
author commentSparrow
Fri, 2015-09-25 03:18
Loved
I is still here,
Now though it is a great thing to honour your fellow poets we have a task to write good poetry so that we can warrant those that critique in the correct manner, whoever that poet may be lol. Not one of your best we need a notice board here for items of this kind and to keep all informed.
Take care young Bard, Yours Ian..
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Geremia
Fri, 2015-09-25 09:49
You honor us all with the
You honor us all with the truth of your poems.
joe
lovedly
Fri, 2015-09-25 12:39
thanx
Joe.....
hope Ian reads this too
author commentSparrow
Fri, 2015-09-25 13:53
Loved
I loved your praise but I would love the energy to be given to others.
I am blessed that I can be here each day and be with all of the ones I know and love, take care young Bard I know it was good,
Yours, Ian
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scribbler
Fri, 2015-09-25 11:09
I think
which likely surprises most folks, lol that the title is excellent and does a really good job of setting the stage for a tribute poem which is at least above average. BTW I seldom critique tribute poem as I consider doing so to be a bit out of place for some reason.......stan
lovedly
Fri, 2015-09-25 14:43
with no intent to flatterry
Stan your comments are abs pragmatic
and i love em
u r a learned man
who is the publisher ???
can we know his name
only 200 dollars
wow lovely go ahead
will he sell the book
ask him
these guys take money
all risk is urs
sale is ur baby too
I have come across so many
across the GLOBE
Why should any one earn and give money to u ????
mostly we have to buy and gift our works
that's been my experience
author commentscribbler
Fri, 2015-09-25 15:46
The publisher is a her
and I'll reveal her name when things get a bit farther along........stan
lovedly
Fri, 2015-09-25 18:28
glad shall
when ever
i too want to publish some of mine
all by myself
if u can edit and help whenever
thanks Stan
author commentSparrow
Fri, 2015-09-25 19:02
Stan
I have opened a folder for the poems from all our poets for the start to build up into a book.
I will sort out mine and any that are sent to me, then when they are needed I will send them to where ever either in blocks or all in one go, this can be sorted later,
Yours Ian..
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Unconditional love to you all.
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lovedly
Fri, 2015-09-25 20:47
you thrill me Ian
I will now compose fresh ones only
you may select
if you wish
and thanks for considering me as one
amongst the class of poets u head
thanks Ian and Stan
author commentSparrow
Fri, 2015-09-25 18:38
Loved
Search your poetry records and find at least three for the book.
The selection will take a month or so young Bard so we need to start collecting a great number of poems.
They can be PM'd to me or Stan to start with, I shall have to find a place to store all of them and compile some order of pages etc: so it will take a while.
Yours Waiting for the young Bard's poetry, Ian..
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