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Hands Built Upon Rock

breath deep my friend
inhale to fragrance of lavender mist
lie awake in secret as two parting doves in flight
dust off the extremities of disorder
Oh pale sun doth rich earth

create a chasm as if a void
go deeper then before penetrating the heart
we lie in wait to deceive
heads in the street
the fertile soil is blemished with blackened tar

pray tell me where to begin
this game of life amidst the foolish strife
vibrations, tempatations & questions
never forgetting always hoping
hands built upon a rock

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