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half of my entity

Submitted by veeenby on Tue, 2020-12-08 05:06

hand in hand
in the back seat
of a white jeep

two souls experiencing love
could've been lust
that's not what it was

lovers that stop time

a twin flame

my love
how i adore you
your everything

light of my life
beat in my heart
blood in my veins

a power source
a piece of me

half of my entity

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Free verse
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Not Explicit Content

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veeenby

Tue, 2020-12-08 08:05

veeenby's picture

Hi. I used the right word. Its to be read as "I adore you, and your everything" but without and. However, thank you!!

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