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Haiku

It is I, alone
strolling under moonlit sky
owl, prowls summers night

darkness surrounds me
tree tops sway in wind that spooks
underneath the moon

scurrying mouse runs
peaceful sound of twigs breaking
it’s Natures beauty

In my sleeping bag
I hope to fall asleep soon
awaking at dawn.

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There is a nice relation to all of the Verses.
One thing I love about short Japanese is ya can put em together pretty much anywhere.
I myself would work on the language.

Kangaroo mouse hops

they are cute little buggers - thieves they are lol

But just an example of using language to your poems advantage.

Keep on it, Teddy,
Mark

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I'm camping alone!

So lovely to see you here yes, the structure isn't easy it's taken me a while to get this as is.

Thank you...Teddy

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OK gonna get out my camping poem hahaha
You are most welcomed,
Mark

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Get out your camping poem I would love to read it!

Dear Mark ps the end of this poem should have been awaken to dawn I hope? lol

but didn't have licence
I'm not really camping alone I would never have the corouge.

Thank you...Teddy

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