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Gypsy Way

this weather
is like a mirror

my soul is crisp
like the
autumn air

changing, I swear

I am shedding
the past
like dead leaves

the sky is now

on my healing heart

after three quarters
of a year
of doleful rain

a relationship lost
internal pain

I am ready
in a gypsy way

to move on

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