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GREEN AS RAIN FOREST

Submitted by lovedly on Wed, 2022-04-13 19:36

happy greenery see me
eyes green
blood green

so are my surroundings
dress and tree leaves
snow is over
winter has been canned slowly
leaves are budding up greenery

come to Florida and swim
in green bikini
at green sea

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

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Candlewitch

Thu, 2022-04-14 06:26

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many, many long years ago, I visited Pensacola Florida. it was a paradise. thanks for bringing that memory back.

*hugs, Cat

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lovedly

Thu, 2022-04-14 10:06

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so I B

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