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Gorgeous Creation

She is beauty
gorgeous creation
Your beautiful face
makes me tremble
my heart beat can’t keep pace
as I look at your charming face

wow you are so elegant
sweetest one

you are so cool
at may be just nineteen
you’re the cynosure of many an eye
millions will for you love to vie

you are astounding you know
meet me only just once
ere from the earth I go

I love your gorgeous smile
Oh magnificent style

come and meet me
will you at my place

you are exquisite
you know
I can see your charms
as you glow

now you are blushing too
where are you
where
are you
where
o where
are you

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Free verse
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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words: 
on second thoughts the mightiest wisest created a wonderful creation
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Cynosure? Really? How many people do you think will readily use that word? Nice that you went to the dictionary for a new word; and you did get it right, but... I think [ NorthStar ] would do just as well and better, if they don't have to stop and figure out what it means. ~ Gee.
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let cynosure be
I am a poet truly
this poem was composed
when I was myself
the Pole star
Ah!
Is it still funny
doggy style maybe
it's lovely

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