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Good Morning O World

Submitted by lovedly on Fri, 2020-06-12 02:27

The world today
is an exceedingly
isolated
very lonely alien's place
on each face
a mark do trace

today we are here
tomorrow
do not our steps trace

we may have been taken away
by the
ALMIGHTY'S
SENTINELS GRACE

Still keep your steady pace
I shall remain also
at my destined palace

Be it the wishes of
HIS
I say
where in New York
would anyone try to chalk one's
way
today the most
riskiest place

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UNDER THE PREVAILING ENVIRONMENT- WHO KNOWS- NOT EVEN ANY GOD -JUST NAME ONE
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tyro

Fri, 2020-06-12 04:20

Hi lovedly I agree with you about the state of the world today. I also like that first stanza.

T

The most powerful reaction
of mind on mind
is transference of sight

lovedly

Fri, 2020-06-12 09:55

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''The world today
is an exceedingly
isolated
very lonely alien's place
on each face
a mark do trace''

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Geezer

Fri, 2020-06-12 13:57

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that mankind does not connect with the Earth as he used to. Too bad, as it is all we have. No place to go and no time to get there. So let's take care of the only home we have. ~.Geez.
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lovedly

Sat, 2020-06-13 00:34

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''So let's take care of the only home we have.''
how TRUE
HOME
MY HOME
YOUR HOME
MANKIND'S HOME
NATURE AND EARTH
OUR ONLY HOME
since aeons
thence and still hence
no pretense

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