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Good bye Esker ....REVIEWED (AS UNREAD AS YET)

When DARK clouds
come by
they convey

we forecast
a heavy rainfall
may be snow
no one ever knows
the clouds
may pass by also

The great poet of Neo
has left us
most of us
in sorrow
may the clouds look after him
where ever
from here he does go

we will only remember
his words of wisdom

let's overcome
all sorrow
let all know
he will live in times
we call

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Free verse
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and Amen again!

I'd rather learn from one bird how to sing
than teach ten thousand stars how not to dance
ee cummings

when death becomes
the inevitable full stop
who can erase
or add another stop
none never
So all oldies like you and I
think of the distance
between our last coma
and final full stop
You so boldly say
on behalf of poets of lure
who by now since 1976
must have gone away
for ever for sure
Full stop.

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