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Gone with the Wind

"Gone with the Wind" at cinemas,
A favourite with the mas and pas
But not so dear to you and I
For we were younger, didn't sigh
When Gable's goodbye at the door
(a loser in the civil war)
Meant Southern Belle was out of luck
When she heard "I don't give a damn."

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Structured: Western
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words: 
yes, there is a rhyme to be found
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Comments

is this exercise two?
lol - i am looking forward to your exercise 3 xx

"Gone with the WIN-d" at CIN-eMAS,
A favourite with the MAS and PAS
But not so dear TO YOU and I
For we WERE younGER, didn't SIGH
When Gable's goodBYE at the DOOR
(a loser in the civil WAR)
Meant Southern Belle was out of luck
When she heard "I don't give a damn."

any more?
still smiling
love judy
xxxx

'Each for the joy of the working, and each, in his separate star,
shall draw the Thing as he sees It, for the God of Things as They are.'
(Rudyard Kipling)

What Rett would say in this cruder age would probably complete this mind rhyme............stan

I can't remember the correct term for the implied rhyme,
in the last line.

Actually, I loved the movie, does this mean I'm a conservative lesbian?

cheers,
Jess
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