but gilboa is not as tame yet. i like this.
always,
mag

beauty in concrete
there is none
its like bones of
death
stone is more beautiful
and dirt tracks
for birds for their crop
for children playing on
slower routes
for making tracks
dogs and bikes

I like your title immensely
and find your poetry powerful
and avatar stimulating to
my creative senses

thank You

Interesting title. suggestion:

once the
the dirt road
remove one of "the"

very nice write!

always, Cat