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God requests

God requests

You all are abs right
God looks after you
when we all are out of his sight...

In heaven alone
HE/SHE
Might

on mommy Earth
keep your bootlaces
yourself tight

the OLE man/ (woman)
heaven alone knows

... nowhere ---

NOT DISCOVERED
as yet

has 7.5 billion plus more
+ add ons daily
to care for

coming from you
all special ones
it’s a
GLARE
none at Lovers like me
alone
now need to blankly stare

Please kindly
for sake heavenly

Give GOD a long rest

He/ (and why not She!)
must be tired too
watching all folks
like me and you

O God if you are somewhere
come (and wash our eyes)
if you about us so much care

we cannot of your real existence
to question
DARE

but all HUMANITY
still keeps you
in love and eternal care

You know why
since you alone are

LORD GOD
ONLY ONE
COMMON

any and every where
OMNI POTENT
OMNISCIENT
AND
OMNIPRESENT

Past Future and
of course Present

So all do spread perfume
and
ROSY scent

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Comments

great sentiments in this piece really good keep it going really good you got going on here

Mario Vitale

mighty thnx
you have spotted all
the whole truth
I've tried to spell
great you have
an alive mind

author comment

spiritual

always remember to make a critique of other poems
using the hoe is not madness for nothing

ur
S P I R I T U A L
THANKS Chiori
for smiling at me

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