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A ''GOD'' MUST EXIST BEYOND THE REALMS OF TIME

This piece of work is off my mind after having traveled the Earth for now nearing 83 years seen over 200 to 300 cities round the world and studied the HUMAN MIND and lives...having applied my mind to all details of HUMAN .... to begin with the Kingdom of Rulers. I have as much as you all must have observed Queen Victoria ruled the longest 64 years
But now Queen ELIZABETH 11 has or rather is enjoying her 70Th PLATINUM JUBILEE shall last longer still ...Queen mother -her mom crossed 101 years ... there is no reason she will not
And yet we observe if you have read my last poem... some are born only to die some cross midlife few need death owing to pain and Medical conditions but you ie MAN do not permit EUTHANASIA ---legal and property matters get encircled
And as we can sea few live at least 116 or 117 years... life is for them on...live beyond it even though they are very minuscule ... could be you...So beyond eternity and infinity there must be a power existential which will descend some day beyond TIME and spread his /her
WINGS over the Earth and exhibit the presence to your and my mind in extention of us ...our progeny you and I will not be existent for the unimaginable occurrence... that bright day come the POWER OF ALL POWERS you call Creator ...that may be the day call it MAY TODAY

To be continued ask QUESTIONS AS MANY......A CHALLENGE GIVEN TO ME HENCE A PROSAIC POEM ...WAIT FOR CONTINUATION ASK QUESTIONS CLARIFICATION ADD SPIRITUALISM KNOWLEDGE POWER YOU CONTAIN...AND LIFE AFTER DEATH YOU WISH TO SUSTAIN

Style / type: 
Free verse
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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words: 
PROSAIC POETRY
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Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

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I see you have put a lot of thought and effort into this piece. well done

*hugs, Cat

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