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Goating Around

I used to share my kitchen
with a Goat called Tina
yes you heard me, a Goat
She was the cutest animal
she used to make her way in
and sit on the couch too
She was such a great Goat
she thought she was a Dog
I didn't have the heart to tell her
she wasn't, so I just obliged
That's the luxury
of a life lived in Tuscany

Not too shabby.

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This is a very fun poem. I love how short and sweet it is, and the second to last line, I do not know why, but it made me laugh.
As for critique: the word 'abliged' is actually spelled 'obliged'. And then 'Not to shabby' should be 'Not too shabby' other than that I have no critique, mostly because this is free verse and I don't write free verse, so I wouldn't know how to critique it.
But a very fun poem indeed.

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I hope I can call you that, as you can see I have some trouble with typos, I cannot thank you enough, my mind is not on the job. Maybe you were laughing at my typos or maybe of Tina, lol she was truly a gorgeous goat. She had one ear that flopped over. Thank you so much for coming by I feel completely honoured this evening.

Thank you...Teddy

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And figured this was going to be about your OTHER goat lol

LoL. Hey she was fabulous and never actually got on my goat not like my other! (Ha ha)

Thank you...Teddy

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a friend of mine and I used my Nubian goats to practice our roping skills for cattle on. The jerk got a bit too abusive with those gentle animals--and that was the end of that. Good poem, enjoyed.

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Thank you. Sorry to hear that.

Thank you...Teddy

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I have always wanted a pigmy goat so I can see your goat sitting on your sofa as pleased as punch

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I was so lucky to live in such surroundings, sometimes the horse would get out and I'd also see her trotting past my window, of course that did give me a fright my sofa isn't so big! Lovely to see you dear Chrys.

Thank you...Teddy

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Dear Teddy, I've had a good laugh, thank you! We had goats on our farm, but not in our kitchen. I would have let one in, but my parents would not allow it. There must be thousands in Tuscany.
I like your title, content and spacing. No nits, except for those few typos already mentioned above.
All the best, Gracy

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"My soul is painted like the wings of butterflies; fairy tales of yesterday will grow but never die, I can fly, my friends.” – Freddie Mercury

I'm so glad you have laughed. she was a true friend to me in my first years of living abroad. I think I got the typos thank you so much, always a pleasure to see you.

Thank you...Teddy

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