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Geneology
In this dream you are
The bones of your father.
And with your lunacies
As infinite as
Your ecstasies
You pity yourself
With great contempt...
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Geezer
Sat, 2020-04-18 21:20
Hmmmm...
very profound. Expressing the fear that you are your father, the one that you loathe and revile, even though you swore that you wouldn't be? ~ Geezer.
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Sparrow 42
Sun, 2020-04-19 03:57
tonebone
I agree with Gee,
It is up to you who you take after and develop into.
The Buck stops here and it is your fault who you become ,
Take care Aim for Everest,
Yours Ian T
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tyro
Sun, 2020-04-19 09:53
I like how smoothly the words
I like how smoothly the words flow in your poem.
T
The most powerful reaction
of mind on mind
is transference of sight
tonebone
Mon, 2020-04-20 13:10
Geneology
thank you for your your comments. it seems everyone has the gist on this one. thak you.
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